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The music maker

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The music maker

Postby Abilene on Mon Aug 31, 2009 7:05 pm

You are the music maker
The sweet rhythm in us all
The master of the given word
Where each poet's voice is HEARD.
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Postby bluejay on Mon Sep 07, 2009 4:06 am

I like this little ditty, of sorts. But it seems to me that "master" could be replaced with something else, not really sure what, but something less definite.
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