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string to live

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string to live

Postby jain on Tue Jul 07, 2009 7:05 am

leaves of memory fall, gently
I will gather and pick them all
today tomorrow and days to come
till my life’s through.

I will always cherish knowing you
loving you, having you in a way
no one knows about,
possibly
your own self .
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Postby bluejay on Sun Jul 12, 2009 6:11 am

line 8 needs an s on know. a good piece to give to the person this was written about.
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Postby jain on Sun Jul 12, 2009 8:10 am

Steve,
thank you for the comment.
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