FreeWrights Peer Review™

Just wanted to say that, being as I'm new here, and admittedly rather ignorant on poetic form, I've been rather hesitant to critique and throw my two cents worth into the pot. I have been (justifiably) chastised for my lack of participation and, for better or worse, you'll now be hearing more from me. So if I fumble and bumble about and wind up poo pooing all over someones rhythm or structure, you can lay full blame exactly where it's due --- on BlueJay! Just kidding (but only on where to lay the blame!).

I thought this one was appropriate.

Diane

Windy. Good job on diving in, the site can be very slow at times, but eventually you will get back more than you give.
Cheers .

ps, and don’t show bluejay any mercy

EGADS! All I did was make a friendly suggestion. Bash the bluejay all you want, but generally he is a good ol' guy.

No apologies are ever need on this forum, and to Windy a big, fat.....TOUCHE!

Don't worry Bluejay, after reading some of the works on this and other sites, I've come to the conclusion that any bashing delivered by me will be done with the flat edge of a dull blade. I'm feeling distinctly unlearned right now. I see a lot of honing and sharpening in my future, but just you wait . . .


eventually ;D

Diane