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Quantum Haiku

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Quantum Haiku

Postby TroutParadigm on Thu May 14, 2009 12:48 am

Eyebrow comet streaks
Meteoric sparks rust brown
Fighting for heaven
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Postby bluejay on Thu May 14, 2009 10:44 pm

Fishy,

I find that this simple piece paints quite a set of images. I found myself into heavy thought about comets and meteors and their respective tails, whizzing around in the blackness, etc, etc.
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Postby TroutParadigm on Fri May 15, 2009 3:21 am

Blue Tweetie Bird,

Thanks for commenting. Remember also in your musings that the title is small.


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