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Wenn Liebe zu ungeduldig wird

Post for light, positive commentary: unfinished or unserious poems, poetry by others, by beginners, etc.

Wenn Liebe zu ungeduldig wird

Postby wec on Mon Feb 09, 2009 8:12 pm

Wenn Liebe zu ungeduldig wird
Verdirbt sie die freudige Stunde.
Erheischt sie mehr wie angebracht ist
Und kränkt selbst die heiligste Bunde.

Gott hilf mich meine Liebe selbstlos behalten
Als ihre Meinungen zu anspruchsvoll sind
Hielt mich immer von ihren Verwüstungen ab
Die machen den Mann den selbstsüchtigen Kind.
Last edited by wec on Tue Feb 24, 2009 4:01 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Postby bluejay on Thu Feb 12, 2009 5:58 am

wec,

good to see a post! a gutten blobben der wirden maken, but I will have to go to one of the translator sites and see what it tells me. I always like this kind of thing when mor and leanne do it. tests us with new horizons.
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