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the night of unbelonging

Painting, photography, graphic design.

the night of unbelonging

Postby jeRRy.whaLLey on Thu Jul 03, 2008 9:12 pm

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the night of unbelonging


before the fire
the crescent moon
fell into the ocean

to the windy howls of night --
a hopeless lantern
wandering

longitudinally bound,
waned with portentous gravity --
piercing bells tormented

our hapless faces
to homeless unbelonging --
a slow movement

of reaching sea
while black smoke billowed,
blotting out the sky

where once we dreamt --



-- unbelonging is not a really an accepted word but reflects the longing lostness of the scene where hapless faces watch their built up lives disappear into black smoke in the sky -- this happened here just a month ago as a recalled Ford vehicle spontaneously combusted in the underground car park -- I was trying to capture the lunar and windy wails as portentous 'warning' imagery -- which is how it happened as I was awakened in the night to the howling of the wind and could see the crescent Moon setting into the Sea -- somehow that wake up call was chilling -- then the alarms rang out and smoke filled the sky --
-- we do not live on the Earth we ARE the Earth --
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