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the otherside-inside of morning breath

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the otherside-inside of morning breath

Postby andrew. on Thu May 29, 2008 4:40 am

Crawled inside my mouth
Indiana Jones style,
slept through
till mid-afternoon

and found myself on lolling tongue.
Bacteria!
Oh Shit, I cried
and did a quick one-two,
four-five,
jive myself through
saliva,

dive-
three-seven-eight,
got
out.

Swung on tonsils
Tarzan-like
farted down
my throat
choked

came out barely alive
need a smoke,

in bed. Breathless,
glowing like a prince.
i wish i could grow a beard.
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