FreeWrights Peer Review™

today--
new job, sparkling
like an island.

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stocking shelves.
picking fruit, shelving it.
dog-food, shelving.
sweating a bit.
each fortnight get a cheque
buy some beer.

drink.
sleep.
stock.
wank
maybe
about
the
girl
in
aisle
FIVE.

shelve that. she has a boyfriend, wears
make-up and t-shirts with holes in them.
maybe i'll smile at her, see what happens.

fuck
her in
aisle
FIVE,
maybe.

but at least now i can go home to a cold beer.
and that's all a guy really needs; love.

In the proper English speaking world (ie outside the US) we spell it "cheque" you know...

Those supermarket PAs are never going to seem the same, thanks for that. Now I'll know why they needed a cleanup in aisle five.

thanks for the spot on 'cheque'...yes, the old aisle 5 comes back. 5, really, just because of the sound of it. I thought about 4, but it made me nervous.