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To seek with skin the firm soil of the sea,
and like the riving of flesh let your
body swallow itself in the salted charm;
into soft embrace.
Blood swells about you, head pulsing with the
sweet chorus of a playful Siren; her body as one
with the music of her soul.
And swell, then rise above the surface
for a quick, fleeting, breath. Swallow
air like a lovers' tongue, and dream
this dream forever more.
Never say as you explode inside the grip
of unrivalled passion that you have not lived;
have not tasted the sea, the salt, the sweat,
the warmth.
Say no more-- on your smile every secret
you have ever had is exposed. We see
your bold fingers, the salt on your grin,
the lover in your eyes; the sea
unfolding with every breath.