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Of Love and Letters

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Of Love and Letters

Postby andrew. on Thu Feb 07, 2008 1:36 am

Its not your fault
I would be jealous of me too.

The way I write myself into legs
and run while you dawdle
on the point of sacrifice.

The touch of my skin as smooth
as a baby, while you continue
to menstruate in the bath.

That which is holy I crown
upon my head, you,
you wear your heart like shoulder pads.
And I am not amused.

The way you seek the stink
then flush your body
the way you smell of virgin meat
the way I want to carve my
name into your skin, is not
of love but of letters.
And that is truth.
i wish i could grow a beard.
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Postby bluejay on Sun Feb 10, 2008 1:58 am

Peculiar and interesting write. First five lines are great, the finish lively.
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