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Musk

A place where the ingredients may be raw and spicy. Not for those under 18 or otherwise innocent-minded.
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Musk

Postby Leanne on Tue Feb 26, 2008 9:56 am

There was shit on my shoe
and I licked it off
thinking it was toffee

Savouring taste and texture
and the only thing stopping it going down
was the bile rising to drown it

Remembering the times
I should have wiped you on the kerb
but licked you off
instead
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Postby visitor on Tue Feb 26, 2008 10:56 am

I enjoy the irony your awning (title) provides. This unflinching poem gets right to the heart of the matter, and snagged my attention with the sharp contrasts ( shit/toffee,musk/bile )
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Postby Leanne on Tue Feb 26, 2008 10:39 pm

Isn't it amazing what we'll do to avoid upsetting the very proper boat? True story, though the shoes were fake.
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