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Liebe und Freudschaft

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Liebe und Freudschaft

Postby wec on Mon Feb 23, 2009 8:28 pm

Liebe, ich glaube, wird nie schwinden
Wenn die Leibhaber Freudschaft verteilen
Denn nichts wie Liebe zwei Seelen verbinden,
Aber Freunden zusammen ehrbietig verweilen.

Freundschaft ist ruhig, guduldig und klug,
Liebe, heißblütig, hingebend.
Während Liebe den Erdboden der Freundschaften pflügt
Muss Freundshaft Liebes Auswuchs bezähmen.
Also diese, meine Hoffnung und höchsten Flehen :
Darf unser Leben stats Liebe und Freundschaft ansehen.
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Postby Kayv on Wed Mar 11, 2009 2:02 am

Unfortunately, my German is so rusty, I'd be amiss in critiquing, but most of this I enjoyed.
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