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Oh, these Hearts


There are moments when rhapsody
expands the heart to bursting in song
like the rays of the morning Sun.

Lovers are by night and day,
they travel in silken weaves,
teardrops when they cannot stay,
dreams of future meetings on sandy beaches
and not once do they doubt their loving
as there is no thought of this,
yeah, they are lost in the kiss -

– To kiss the beloved with the same
kiss the beloved kisses me
and in that kiss live an eternity –
Oh, our Hearts know this,
Love attracts Love,
the secret of the kiss –

in the Garden of Hearts where Love grows,
you and I and we are unnecessary distinctions -
let us be this empty yearning together,
with this ancient ache of longing,
the heart a compass, taking us where,
Love is the goal, I'll meet you there –

- there are ecstasies lingering between these words,
feelings of connectivity rhapsodizes the spaces and longing,
that intimate language of the Heart, permeates therein -

You feel the words like the warmth of the Sun
making you pause --
a remembrance in the light
the silent song in the particle
hurtling through space to your face -

to look and look and dare to see
from in the Heart so wonderfully,
that all the beauty we can embrace
comes from inside your original face -

A Heart of Love knows not to compare
'nor differentiates in any way,
as Love is as Love does
making only Love every day.

As above and so in you
the light, the warmth, the sky of blue
and in the darkest of the nights
the Stars that sparkle as they do...

I see the glint of light in your eye,
– it shows how bright shines your flame,
and by this enamoured fire gives the light again and again -

this baptism of fire flashing in a Loving look
- bursting with the light of the Sun.

delightful sentiment and expression

but tell me, Mr. Alchemist,

why did you post this in the erotica-smut-harsh language floor?

Oh, well I thought uncooked meant that the Poem was not fully 'cooked' and ready for public display -- also, I've seen that the sense based metaphor can be a delightful vehicle to describe that same sentiment of 'Love attracts Love' even if considered somewhat raunchy or lewd -- the Heart is juicy when in Love so is the BODY as it shares it's juicyness --

anyways my mistake -- lol

Jerry,

Are you an ambassador of collective love?
Do you participate in orgies?
Do you dislike anyone vigorously?

Please feel free to respond to all/any/none of the above.