FreeWrights Peer Review™

I guess I should've known better,
Maybe this time I'll learn.
What a stupid girl I must be,
To think it wouldn't phase me.

Friends with benefits?
You shouldn't fall.
Hold my gut and wipe my eyes.
Plug my ears, ignore my call.

Is this really what we want?
The truth is on it's way.
These simple things we held so tight,
All we seem to do is fight.

What you have become my dear,
You promised me you wouldn't.
Don't convince me I'm to blame,
Believing you is something I couldn't.

He makes me feel so loved,
I'm perfectly fine pretending.
I guess it's hard enough being me,
These circumstances in which we see...

Slagcake, I stumble a lot on the second stanza. I don't understand it completely. The rest is a little chopy. I think you are trying to hard to rhyme. Just a thought.


Sergio