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Dodging Bullets

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Dodging Bullets

Postby kjb on Mon Oct 26, 2009 12:20 am

Dodging Bullets
(for you)

No names here
only passage.
The cheerful grit of farce
between margins
not every round thing will roll.

When faith is kept in words
the Hawthorn edge is fluid
believe me
there is another scab to pick.

How can we learn the touch of moonlight?
mouth open,
just like you’re tasting rain.
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Re: Dodging Bullets

Postby bluejay on Thu Nov 19, 2009 11:54 pm

The cheerful grit of farce

How can we learn the touch of moonlight?

are both very original phrases, otherwise, that is it for me
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Re: Dodging Bullets

Postby kjb on Sat Nov 21, 2009 9:21 pm

bluejay. Thanks for coming in on something so abstract.
appreciated

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