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deep in the wood a caravan wrestles with some
eager overgrowth,
  while, so gently, I
  stroke the pliant tool--


a spanner,
     made from steel
fashioned to unscrew-screw
            unscrew-screw

this; no; verb-object
fast car
speeding fastly
car speeds
fastly.
          brake.
.

a nun pretends at prostitution
a boy strokes his small cock
to rigid contraction; dreams
of neighbour girl-- older,
naked in the swimming pool.

   fashion the sky out of cellophane
and watch it crinkle in the sun.
a dark blue - a plastic sea.
two clowns, wrestling their eccentricities.

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In this world everything is lost but to its maker.

'tis alright Andrew. You might consider shortening L1 and L2 to:

deep in the wood a caravan wrestles
with eager overgrowth,