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Close Distance

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Close Distance

by Cameron on Tue Aug 26, 2008 2:01 am

low tide in winter
gray sand

an echo
of orchestral silence

how long can
how long

how
long a coastline

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by bluejay on Tue Aug 26, 2008 5:39 am

clever piece of work

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by kjb on Tue Sep 16, 2008 12:24 am

Cam, i like this one. I'm missing the significance of 'can' in line 5.
S'ok tho, it's just me dumbing down as i get older.

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