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Child's Play

When young, elbows were her fetish
trained a father’s arm to hang limp
and rolled loose flesh
between tiny fingers.

Ear lobes came next
quite annoying really
but never having known abuse
I saw no harm in child’s delight.

Kneecaps are the funniest as they wobble
on the bone she thought and thumbs
are most cleverly opposed.
At navel poking I just said No!
and this was her reply.
‘dad you sure do have a lot of hang-ups’.

Be grateful you don't have to put up with the "boobie wobble". I definitely remember the earlobes though, you never realise how sensitive these parts are until you have kids...

I'm leaving the forum with a smile on my face, thanks for that.

Leanne. I won't even go near "boobie wobble".
Cheers and thanks for your comments, here and in the Broiler.

Ken